The Pit

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The Pit

Postby mannequin01 » Sun Apr 21, 2019 4:17 pm

My life, is a disgrace, should i turn this situation into an incident
take a knife to my face and cut myself like vincent
i know my mother would express glee im gone
she thought her son would bring the money in but i was weak not strong
should i die on the staircase like lucifer at the altar
protect the earth from my blood so i hope it don't insult her
im a sad sucker sinner where nothing seems to thrill me
i feel affection for my enemy who cares enough to kill me
im already dead but everything around me
seems deader than dead, dead enough to surround me
i protected my spirit but im a sacred vulture
i'll only be exposed as a thorned flower in this naked culture
i see through the lies and all my fake friends
they want me to be strong but not stronger than them
im a nerdy lesbian feminist sitting at my desk
getting high off the milk thats pouring out my breast
put my vagina blood on the cross so you can worship your highness
i've been sentenced to life where i can sense the timeless
if you only knew what i've been through
you would stay away from me like i try to
this is my demise into the ground there is no sky view
where i died, bitch..you'll die too.
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Re: The Pit

Postby promethean75 » Sun Apr 21, 2019 6:41 pm

https://vocaroo.com/i/s15sY9ndOKE6

In the accent of a dude who grew up in London and then moved to Australia when he was 13 and then back to London when he turned 23.
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Re: The Pit

Postby barbarianhorde » Sun Apr 21, 2019 8:32 pm

Haahahah
wtf Zoot

good lyrics, really.
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Re: The Pit

Postby barbarianhorde » Sun Apr 21, 2019 8:45 pm

I have to come back to this thread and reiterate my amazement at how crazy it is.

And how great the lyrics are.

if you only knew what i've been through
you would stay away from me like i try to


haha

Who said rap is dead.
I don't know who said that, if anyone.
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Re: The Pit

Postby mannequin01 » Sun Apr 21, 2019 8:47 pm

:)
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Re: The Pit

Postby Meno_ » Thu May 02, 2019 8:18 pm

They say the night of the living dead is becoming the symbol of disaffected youth the world over. A shrink once said, dunno right or not or partially or impartially, but that borders without walls , an early attempt, in education was a signal of acceptance of borderline conditions as the new norm.

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