Haiku Tag

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Thu Jul 21, 2022 7:14 pm

the eff does that mean

Jesus flanell ask chance fun

clue: numbers in verse
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Thu Jul 21, 2022 7:31 pm

Meno_ wrote:the eff does that mean

Jesus flanell ask chance fun

clue: numbers in verse




OR


the eff does that mean

Ecmando do ask chance fun

clue: numbers in verse
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Sculptor » Thu Jul 21, 2022 7:37 pm

Meno_ wrote:
Meno_ wrote:the eff does that mean

Jesus flanell ask chance fun

clue: numbers in verse




OR


the eff does that mean

Ecmando do ask chance fun

clue: numbers in verse


clue: numbers in verse
most forms in pentameter
its shakespeare in text
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ichthus77 » Thu Jul 21, 2022 8:43 pm

its shakespeare in text
ill take this one to go please
just park it right there
I have no idea.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Fri Jul 22, 2022 2:17 am

I think Sculptor got it.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Fri Jul 22, 2022 2:19 am

Ichthus77 wrote:its shakespeare in text
ill take this one to go please
just park it right there
I have no idea.





I have no idea

Thinking Sculptor got somewhat

Numeric essence
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ichthus77 » Fri Jul 22, 2022 3:21 am

Numeric essence
easily suggestible
missed information
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- A marriage of Sartre & Levinas

“ Gloria Dei est vivens homo. “
Trans.: The glory of God is man fully alive.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Fri Jul 22, 2022 3:57 am

missed information
Nine eight seven =24=6
One two three = 6
Excludes 4 5 6= 6

6 6 6 = 18
1 8 =9
Excludes 6

=3



>>>>>>>>> >


Out of 9
the exclusion of 4 5 6 = (4+5+6)=15=(1+5)=6

and 9 -6=3


Then the sequence 9,63 on a downward sequential order descends toward the essential , while the inessential(material) -which is subordinated, becomes reversed in the upward trajectory.


In between 1 to 9 is 5; that consists both of Shakespearean poesy and Tetramegatron.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Fri Jul 22, 2022 4:14 am

Ichthus77 wrote:Numeric essence
easily suggestible
missed information






missed information
autosuggested respects of criteria
quantum anima
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ichthus77 » Fri Jul 22, 2022 5:40 am

quantum anima
this is way over my head
disentangling
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Fri Jul 22, 2022 5:52 am

Ichthus77 wrote:quantum anima
this is way over my head
disentangling





The soul as it appears early on, contrasts with It's dispersive effect, as it is quantified reversely.

It's unseen union exemplified by a derived simulation, holds together.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Fri Jul 22, 2022 5:58 am

Ichthus77 wrote:quantum anima
this is way over my head
disentangling


disentangling
union reaffirmed
metaphor speak loud
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Sculptor » Fri Jul 22, 2022 8:39 am

Meno_ wrote:
Ichthus77 wrote:quantum anima
this is way over my head
disentangling


disentangling
union reaffirmed
metaphor speak loud


metaphors speak loud
shouting with a synonym
quietude needed
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Fri Jul 22, 2022 10:28 pm

Sculptor wrote:
Meno_ wrote:
Ichthus77 wrote:quantum anima
this is way over my head
disentangling


disentangling
union reaffirmed
metaphor speak loud


metaphors speak loud
shouting with a synonym
quietude needed



Quietude needed

Which antonyms can't draw forth

That synonyms can
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Flannel Jesus » Sat Jul 23, 2022 8:43 am

that synonyms can
that which cinnamon cannot
plant breathy likeness
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ichthus77 » Sat Jul 23, 2022 1:22 pm

plant breathy likeness
baptize with fire and water
life fills in the void
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Sculptor » Sat Jul 23, 2022 2:05 pm

Ichthus77 wrote:plant breathy likeness
baptize with fire and water
life fills in the void


Life fills the Void
Coke adds life with sugared joy
Say good bye to teeth
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ichthus77 » Sat Jul 23, 2022 2:28 pm

say goodbye to teeth
abides a toothless wonder
say hello to truth
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Flannel Jesus » Sat Jul 23, 2022 2:55 pm

Say hello to truth
Coke adds life with druggy joy
But does it really?
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ichthus77 » Sun Jul 31, 2022 5:32 am

But does it really?
she mused as he told her it
really does correct
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Flannel Jesus » Sun Jul 31, 2022 12:30 pm

Really does correct
Correct the bones she told me
Get me out of this
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ichthus77 » Sun Jul 31, 2022 2:13 pm

get me out of this
poorly mismatched alignment
asymmetrical
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Mon Aug 08, 2022 2:51 pm

asymmetrical

a learned taste to one's mind buds

Chew on it. Accept it!
BE MELTING SNOW. WASH YOURSELF OF YOURSELF.

YOU WANDER FROM ROOM TO ROOM
HUNTING FOR THE DIAMOND NECKLACE
THAT IS ALREADY AROUND YOUR NECK!

DANCE UNTIL YOU SHATTER YOURSELF!

THERE IS A VOICE THAT DOESN'T USE WORDS. LISTEN!

LIFE IS A BALANCE BETWEEN HOLDING ON AND LETTING GO!

LET SILENCE TAKE YOU TO THE CORE OF LIFE!
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ichthus77 » Mon Aug 08, 2022 4:35 pm

Chew on’t accept it!
They said right before She said
You must be destroyed
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Mon Aug 08, 2022 4:42 pm

You must be destroyed




as it always appears to


Invisibly yet

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